Description: Just playing with gimp I made the background and I added the mountains, the birds and the penguin. To finish I gave an appearance of oil painting. Thanks
I like both versions, but the first one with the shadows behind the birds a little more. Somehow it instantly reminded me of the movie "The Truman Show" where Truman sails and suddenly reaches the end of his world. There also birds would have made such shadows on the sky/wall. And I like that it stresses the surrealism.
Two comments.
1) The birds shouldn't have 'shadows' as they are in the sky, and besides, the shadows are between them and the sun, which isn't possible.
2) Place the sun and birds in the first 'third' of the sky (to the left).
Other than that, it's a nice composition.
Thanks for your good comment my friend :)
I know about the shadows but I made this error intentionally. I did not want the birds are a part of the picture. The shadows of birds in the sky are illogical and that's what I wanted (hihihi)
But your observation is very good and I will possibly add a second image but without the shadows of birds ;)
Thanks you very much, and have a nice day !
Oh thanks !
I'm glad that you like it :)
I'm not a Pro so frequently I make errors, intentional or not (hihihi)
Thank you for your good advice, it's important :)
Have a nice day,
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I like both versions, but the first one with the shadows behind the birds a little more. Somehow it instantly reminded me of the movie "The Truman Show" where Truman sails and suddenly reaches the end of his world. There also birds would have made such shadows on the sky/wall. And I like that it stresses the surrealism.
Good observation and analysis Janet :) Thanks a lot for your nice comment ! Best Regards,
Artists discretion. :)
Two comments. 1) The birds shouldn't have 'shadows' as they are in the sky, and besides, the shadows are between them and the sun, which isn't possible. 2) Place the sun and birds in the first 'third' of the sky (to the left). Other than that, it's a nice composition.
Thanks for your good comment my friend :) I know about the shadows but I made this error intentionally. I did not want the birds are a part of the picture. The shadows of birds in the sky are illogical and that's what I wanted (hihihi) But your observation is very good and I will possibly add a second image but without the shadows of birds ;) Thanks you very much, and have a nice day !
The second image, with the bird shadows removed and the moon/birds moved into the 'first third' looks very good. Nicely done.
Downloaded and set as my desktop wallpaper. Very pleasing to the eye.
Oh thanks ! I'm glad that you like it :) I'm not a Pro so frequently I make errors, intentional or not (hihihi) Thank you for your good advice, it's important :) Have a nice day,