interesting 3-d design, but i have a couple of suggestions. first, the text on the newspaper looks stretched out vertically (the K-logo true). there's something that seems a bit odd about the viewing angle of the scene too; maybe it's just the curving of the lamp that looks weird, i'm not sure. if the objects are supposed to be realistic, they also don't quite seem properly sized relative to each other.
and finally, have you considered playing around with the rendering of "Kontact"? i'd suggest decreasing the distance on the drop shadow and/or maybe playing with the spacing between characters.
that's my 2 cents, take it or leave it :).
Thanks I'm very thankful for every suggestion I can get. I'll repair this and also I'll play around with the size of the objects.
But one thing I didn't understood what you wanted to say with the Lamp.
Could you explain me please?
And also about the size of the objects, could you say what I should resize?
At last thanks for the suggestions, as I said already I'm thankful for every suggestion I can get. :-)
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interesting 3-d design, but i have a couple of suggestions. first, the text on the newspaper looks stretched out vertically (the K-logo true). there's something that seems a bit odd about the viewing angle of the scene too; maybe it's just the curving of the lamp that looks weird, i'm not sure. if the objects are supposed to be realistic, they also don't quite seem properly sized relative to each other. and finally, have you considered playing around with the rendering of "Kontact"? i'd suggest decreasing the distance on the drop shadow and/or maybe playing with the spacing between characters. that's my 2 cents, take it or leave it :).
Thanks I'm very thankful for every suggestion I can get. I'll repair this and also I'll play around with the size of the objects. But one thing I didn't understood what you wanted to say with the Lamp. Could you explain me please? And also about the size of the objects, could you say what I should resize? At last thanks for the suggestions, as I said already I'm thankful for every suggestion I can get. :-)
good job! it looks very beautiful and the text effects are good made. by the way... you speak english very well!